In the past children lived close to nature and didn’t have TV. Today many children in the world watch TV for many hours. This essay will discuss the problems of watching TV too much and I will suggest some solutions of this problem.
There are many problems of watching TV too much. First of all, the children who watch TV too much will have bad eyesight. As a result, they will be a when they will be very old or can’t see clearly. Another reason, against watching TV too much, without walking or exercising, the children will become obese in early age. The most important reason is the children will be autistic so they will not have social life.
Although these problems are very dangerous, we can solve the problem by taking some solutions. First, educate children to know how is will affect their eyes, not only their eyes, but also their brains. Another solution is to make them walk and exercise every day. Finally, the government should build a small public park in each neighbor, so the children will reduce watching TV and play outside with the children.
To sum up, watching the TV too much is a problem for the children because it will affect their eyes, bodies and social life, we can solve this problem by educating children, give them exercises every day and build a small park in each area. I wish that we have solved this problem.
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